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Recent Movie Reviews

Running in the Sun Running in the Sun

Rated 2.5 / 5 stars

kinda nice low effort animation but get this
out my face

Akko's trip: Little Witch Academia Parody Akko's trip: Little Witch Academia Parody

Rated 2.5 / 5 stars

Seen it a million times but in the pokemon and mario format.
"What if pokemon are dogs and Ash is high?!?!? so funneyXDXD"
"no wait... what if mario ate mushrooms and got high?!?!?! XDXD"
Minus the content, the animation was ok

Aluis-Santiago-Shiru responds:

Thanks man! I actually thought it was my best work, but i might improve my writing better. Also, to be totally honest, i don't think you should talk when you're Christmas comic wasn't original as well. But thanks anyway, yo

Vampire Pixel in the Neon City Vampire Pixel in the Neon City

Rated 4 / 5 stars

Great art/animation but a ton of the action lacked clarity.
1. When viking grabbed the ghost thing it was hard to register because his fist was out of frame (keep important actions onscreen).
2. The ghost thrown through the window was impossible to understand. It becomes instantly far away (it NEEDS a smear if going super fast) and there's a building where it used to be so it looked like it turned into a building or something
3. The cut to viare running was also impossible to register that she was running up a building, it needed either a transition or a camera angle from her side. That one frame of ghost at the beginning of the cut made no sense too, there's no way to know which direction the ghost was moving

I actually prefer rushed pacing during action sequences but in this case it was over the line and I couldn't follow.
Also the personalities were pretty weak. Good characters have glaring personality strengths and weaknesses visible at all times. E.g. the tf2 scout is hasty, proud, mischievous, and annoying (to other characters, not the viewer).

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Recent Game Reviews

White Slayer White Slayer

Rated 4 / 5 stars

janky as hell but kinda cool considering how fast it was made

The Tutorial Collab '08 The Tutorial Collab '08

Rated 4 / 5 stars

Amazing tutorial but a lot of the songs and features have broken. Not sure if a Flashplayer update broke stuff or if content was hosted on a page that no longer exists.

Fatal Flight (~2wk Jam) Fatal Flight (~2wk Jam)

Rated 3.5 / 5 stars

Good sound and visual design, decent enough controls, a better draw distance would be nice.
The only serious problem is that the camera locks for half a second every time you kill an enemy, it makes the game pointlessly frustrating.

kiddRaddical responds:

Ohh wasn't aware of that camera glitch, will try to fix that in the update. Good eye, thanks for playing

Recent Audio Reviews

Stage01-A - "Give In" Stage01-A - "Give In"

Rated 5 / 5 stars

Really heavy, seems like it would be good for a particularly intense sequence.
I've thought about doing a space shooter recently since the programming is so simple, I need to finish my million other projects first though

Zooloo75 responds:

Definitely, go for it! Doing a 2D vertical space shooter similar to Galaga or Space Invaders for practice in HTML5 and Javascript.

Finding Serenity Finding Serenity

Rated 5 / 5 stars

Oh hey I remember you from that music style. Welcome back, good stuff

See The Sunset Again See The Sunset Again

Rated 4 / 5 stars

Great, but stops halfway and the rest is silent :/

Recent Art Reviews

Among The Clouds Among The Clouds

Rated 4.5 / 5 stars

Nice greens. Your texturing is decent but I would recommend only use 2-4 shades of green per tree or patch of grass. You can use a different 2-4 shades for a different leafy object, but I've noticed real-life trees and grass have distinct light and dark areas with no need for much in between. https://cookingintongues.files.wordpress.com/2014/02/balestrand-2-2.jpg

Zooloo75 responds:

Thanks for the advice!

Are you asking for a Challenge? Are you asking for a Challenge?

Rated 5 / 5 stars

Stinkoman is such a great game with a lot of variety, I go back to it once every couple years.

ScepterDPinoy responds:

Minus stealing powerup weapons from bosses except boss 3.

Stephanie Stephanie

Rated 5 / 5 stars

I think you clicked a checkbox saying to not submit this one to the art portal. You need 4 portal-eligible paintings, so if you edit this and make it art portal eligible then I can scout you (so then you can finally submit stuff to the ACTUAL portal). Let me know

Exirry responds:

Hi, I fixed it. Nice assertive Fluttershy BTW