A Boy and his Box uh, long in a bad way.
it's prophesied, not prophesized. The voice acting is really solid, but there's too much narration. Too wordy! it'd be fine if it was an audiobook, but as an animation it's tiresome. Why say "with a great big smile on his face"? It should be visible that he's smiling. If you insist, less adjectives, better words. make it into "with a grin,". The music worked really well, it made it less boring, and improved it by 3X. As for colour, I like how you restricted it a bit, but the gray in the cave wasn't dark enough, and it'd be even better if you gave it slight colouring. I also particularily love how I paused it and it went to the beginning. Not finishing it, sorry.
