HeartOfTheStorm's art Reviews on Newgrounds

[The Hoard Part 35]

Action!

Action is more apparent in this panel! It also helps when the bad bird narrates "I got hit from behind, missile lock, firing flares!" (that would be sweet, add missiles). Thanks for making new comics everyday, my allegiance is yours!

Shane-Frost responds:

Thanks for reading and a bigger thanks for commenting~ ^-^

[Magna Sword]

NICE!

Sweet style! I don't share that guy's view below. Maybe a thermometer. Anyway, The lines on the sword could use straightening obviously, the wrinkles look niiiice, the boots have got it going on, and what with her hips man? Overall it's a flat pose, widen that stance, except those hips... they just... something. Oh, and the two light sources are always a good choice. Also no proportion complaints.

Alef321 responds:

sword looks all fudgy but thats expected from straight lines and circles when it comes to my drawing skills ,and danmm it waas fun doing all those soft shadows and stuff, Multiple light sources FTW