grood
I'm not an experienced music maker, but as a critic this is pretty good. It has variety throughout the 5 mins as well as a central theme, so it feels professional and connected. But it isn't outstanding to me. Hope that doesn't break your heart :P . It has that ugly throbbing bass for most of the song, which doesn't actually sound so bad the way you used it. Another thing is it feels like the eq is too much high end and not enough bass for the most part. Someone tell me if I'm wrong. In summary: it sounds better than rave music, but I wouldn't listen to it on my iPod. Positive mixed feelings.